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Cori_K


From: Southern California

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Jun 2011
Re: "Undeveloped" (Score: 0)
posted Tuesday, October 30, 2012 - 03:45 PM (#62312)

I had to read the first part twice to realize what it was I was reading, and when I did, it was an "Ohhhhhh..." moment--sweet and heartbreaking all at the same time.

Now I have chills and I'm tearing up. This is masterful storytelling--it's a rarity to read something, to get (no pun intended) a perfect snapshot in which you know everything and nothing all at the same time. It's almost painful to read it and realize where the story's going, but I know I don't want to miss a minute of it. Well done.


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